I got an idea once,
Weird though, but seemed new
I went to myself- that untouched one
and brought four candles
Lit them all, quite bright they shone
Picked the first, was called “sorrow”, I read
Wondered why it was shining brightest
Ah! Was about to finish,
Those who shine bright, always fade soon
Then came the candle called “love”
Beautiful, gracious like a seraph, of dreams
White, like a morning cloud in sky
But like sorrow, it too bid goodbye
Third seemed firm than rest of all, “friendship”
Pink, the color, I remember it had
Lasted for long, seemed with me from ages
Nightmare alive, when I saw, it too went off
The last one, now very dim, gone almost; was my “faith”
was kept in middle of others
centered, as if for help, I picked it up and blew it off
Its all dark now..
who sees any ways—You laugh, You cry and then You die
5 comments:
hey dats what is called talent.. ur poem tells the old things but with ur style which rocks..
very nice !! keep posting !!
Ohh Man... Well now in my dictionary.... there are no words to compliment u for this poem... loved it like anything... Damn!!! I m still wondering that how someone can describe his thoughts so beautifully in words... I loved these lines the most......
Those who shine bright, always fade soon
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Its all dark now..
who sees any ways—You laugh, You cry and then You die..
I found last line so realistic... :) Just wish u keep rocking same way...
@manorath thanks a looot for liking it buddy :) I really appreciate yr comment n will try to improve
@gagan thanks, will make sure I "get" enough in my head to keep posting here :P
@priyanka thanks once again, will try to be better :)
a one additional line btw ...
"and Those who fade, yeah they just fade away"
I laughed a lot on my tears,
I cried a lot on those laughs...
I died too; wrapping up my cries, those laughs together
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